Oh Orlando, your art is always so wonderful, so why must you ask for a critique? Well here you go, the originality is low because everyone draws Twilight but your draw style is phenomenal so everything else is high. There is a slight overdose of shading and I don't like how her crest folds. So, if I may, I give you an 8/10. This is truly a wonderful piece and I want to see more from you. After all, who in their right mind wouldn't? Just keep drawing and you will most defiantly improve your faults.